Aug

31

Happy summertime to all blog readers,

I am reminded today, being the last day of August, that the “Summer of 2010” is quickly escaping like sand sifting through our fingertips or like footprints erasing at the shores edge. But we, who love summer so dearly, will hold on to every last moment sincerely and cherish each memory it holds.

We will treasure its charming beauty and bustling flare.

We will cherish its time of family, friends, children and frolic,

Filled with memories pressed like pages in our minds forever.

 Memories of Baby showers and Sunday church hours,

Thanking God and thanking loved ones,

Who make all the memories so much more.  

Flowers galore and Cotuit’s library house tour,

Boating, kayaking, swimming and more

Barefoot walks, informative talks along the beaches shores,

Seashell finds, more dipping times, ice cream stops, and

Lots of shops are some of our times.

Bicycling more bicycling in the new morning light,

Or simply just in afternoon delight,

Feeling the breeze anytime we please!

Writing, re-writing, Cape Cod Children’s Writer’s team,

Blogging and re-trying at children’s books themes with

Listening, learning, and critiquing regimes

All are part of the summer time things.

Meetings, workshops, conferences and more,

Special Sisterhood and new friends, much fun for sure,

Filled with laughter, giggles, dance and song,

Music, stars and peacefully sleeping all night long.

Commuting, more driving, good eats and BBQ’s,

Birthdays’ and Camelot, just to name a few.

Each Summertime day whether spent on my Cape Cod ocean shores, Martha’s Vineyard, NJ, Whitinsville, Newport, RI, Bedford or Meredith, NH were very special indeed. It was a time, a bright and shiny spot, like Camelot, when the shores expressed their most glorious splendor of sparkle, shimmer and shine, the cool waters, refreshed and revived me body and soul and the sun’s golden ray’s danced to the rhythm of love, romance, warmth and comfort.

I smile…I laugh… I thank each and every one of you for sharing your time and love with me in creating a lovely “Summer 2010”.

Bye, for now….jeannie Purpaleanie

Aug

30

 

I would like to inform you of the types of payments publishers offer. The key words match a dollar figure range. 

“nice deal” $1 – $49,000
“very nice deal” $50,000 – $99,000
“good deal” $100,000 – $250,000
“significant deal” $251,000 – $499,000
“major deal” $500,000 and up

Joan

Aug

29

You may expand your creative abilities by paying attention to your dreams. Keep a notebook and pen handy. Reread your entry first thing in the morning, ask yourself “What If”, and expand your story’s possibilities as soon as possible. 

Just before falling asleep, try thinking about a character who is troubling you, or an unfinished scene. Perhaps you will dream about a solution. When we sleep the  unconscious mind is set free.

SWEET DREAMS
JOAN

Aug

28

Hello all, I have heard you and now you have two weeks to post a reply to the game.  

Remember 50 words max.  2 weeks, all six required words and Keep on topic. 

Topic;  When it rains it pours

Six Words;

French

Show

Skirt

Creamy

Hidden

Wicked

Prize; Besides round three bragging rights, the winner will receive a blog interview

Good Luck!

Aug

27

My blogging day for CCCW is Fridays. Tomorrow we are having a family cookout—at MY house. I have been SO busy getting ready— cleaning, yard work, cooking potatoes for the potato salad, shopping—I forgot to write my blog. It is 7 p.m.

 Here I sit with a blank mind wondering what to write that would be meaningful. My blogging is blocking! Sometimes it seems difficult to come up with a fresh new topic every week (like this week).

Next week I am away on vacation with my husband at Booth Bay Harbor, Maine, and I will be away from my computer and the internet. I will have a respite from blogging.

 In the two weeks until my next blog entry I will hopefully come up with an “interesting” topic. Until then…

 Angel Blessings, Susan Lee

Aug

25

Greetings;
Imagination: Every writer must have a creative (inventive) mind in order to hold a reader’s attention. Webster’s Dictionary describes imagination as “An act or process of forming a conscious idea or mental image of something never before wholly perceived in reality by the imager.”
Constructing a story from one’s own feelings and observations, connected through vivid descriptions and, hopefully, a novel idea is a good BEGINNING. Joining those thoughts into a plot whereby readers can believe, “that could happen” is where skill steps in. So how does a writer gain such skills? In order to write words, each of us had to learn individual letters (alphabet) first for without basics there is no clear path to increased knowledge. The basics for new writers include becoming a part of a writers’ group for learning is more fun when several creative minds work together.
Reading is also an essential basic. The more one reads, the more skills are absorbed, often subconsciously. A skilled writer shows in the plot how to direct a scene with specific word choices. Someone once noted in a writing class, “…what’s the use of reading someone else’s work. Those aren’t my words or my thoughts.” The instructor replied with a smile, “It’s like priming a water pump in order for new water to burst forth. The more one reads, the more creative thoughts germinate in a writer’s mind.”
There have been many times, while I’m reading, when a certain phrase or circumstance triggers long-forgotten sensory memories. Sometimes, it’s so strong I must put down the book, open my notebook (always close by) and detail my new thoughts before they drift away into some ethereal haze and are lost. (It does make it difficult to keep reading a good author’s book, but learning should never cease for a writer.)
Another basic: Never be far from some device to record a new idea or feeling, whether it’s a notebook, recorder, or computer. Some great ideas for stories are lost because those tools aren’t handy. I keep a notebook and pen on my bedside table and a small one in my pocketbook. When a certain person speaks, or a scene unfolds, or a weather condition explodes, you’re there to witness and record those realities. Later, when writing, include those realities to make your story more believable. Combining imagination with real life happenings and your own on-going learning process will make you a better writer.
Have a great day today and smile. It makes people wonder what you’re up to. Linda

Aug

24

Good morning and happy Tuesday dear readers. Today my mind is so preoccupied with the coming of little “John Cullen Tesa” to be known as “J. Cullen Tesa”, or little “Cully” that I can hardly contain myself! My daughter, Aubrielle, and son-in-law, Alec, are due any day now for their first child and my first grand-child!! How exciting is that…I ask you? Aubrielle is the oldest of my four children and was married on July 5, 2008 in beautiful Bar Harbor, ME.  She and Alec and their three (3) dogs now reside in fabulous Newport, RI where Alec is an architect and project manager for a major builder in the area.

 Last night after work, I drove down to Newport to spend the evening with them, relax, have some dinner and share some time together before little Cullen arrives; it was lovely. The heat spell has taken a mini vacation and the cool rains are welcoming to my sweet expectant mama “Brie” or “Brie-Brie” (her fun childhood nickname).    Driving back to work today, I couldn’t stop reminiscing about my last expectant days, waiting on endless summer hours, for my “baby” to be born.  I didn’t know then if I was having a boy or a girl. I so wanted to have one of each, but secretly was hoping for a girl since I came from a family of all sisters and naively thought I might know more about raising a girl over a boy. All the mixed emotions of (glee.. humility.. anxiety)  bundled into one thought.  How can it be…that I,..( me?) … am about to be a mother, I mused.  “Aubrielle” came six days late, July 16, 1983, just perfect…right on God’s time.

 Here I am now, 27 years later, filled with more joys and triumphs than my heart and mind can even behold. Inevitably, I have experienced many trials of life, mired with struggles and fears. However, the “pulse” of my heart and immeasurable honor and privilege of my life is one of motherhood.  The investment I pursued for these precious “little ones” that God gave me is the same reason I do diligence to write children’s books.  I want to leave my children a heritage of the reminder of the sweet treasures they are to me and hopefully leave a legacy of my love and devotion for them.  Stay tuned, my reader friends, and I will be sharing the birth of little “Cullen” and the joys of becoming “Grammie jeannie”!

When it rains…look for the rainbows!  Bye for now…jeannie “Purpaleanie”

Aug

23

In my last blog, I talked about listening to books on CD’s while driving, as a way to become familiar with many great children’s books. I have been working my way through Newbery prize-winning books, hoping to absorb the wonderful language, great openings, well-developed characters, pacing, humor, plot twists, and satisfying endings.

Last week I listened to CRISPIN AND THE CROSS OF LEAD by Avi, which was awarded a Newbery medal in 2003. The author, who only goes by the name Avi, has written over 70 books for children and two previous books won Newbery Honor awards, (TRUE CONFESSIONS OF CHARLOTTE DOYLE, 1991; and NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH, 1992). In addition, many of Avi’s books have won other prestigious awards for excellence.

Exploring Avi’s web site www.Avi-writer.com yielded interesting information about him. He was born in 1937, and his twin sister called him Avi when they were only one year old. He has gone by that name ever since.

Avi was not a good student, and was a poor writer. He failed all his courses in high school. He was sent to a small school with an emphasis on reading and writing, yet he still needed special tutoring.

By the time Avi was a senior in high school, he had decided to become a writer. He started out as a playwright, and didn’t write for children until he had children of his own. His first book was published in 1970.

CRISPIN AND THE CROSS OF LEAD takes place in a 14th century medieval English village. Thirteen-year-old Crispin, known only as “Asta’s son,” finds out from a priest his true name after his mother dies. The priest gives him a lead cross with a secret inscription on it. Before the priest can tell him about his father and his true name, the priest is killed and Crispin has to flee for his life. Every chapter of Avi’s historically accurate story leaves the reader in suspense.

Listening to Avi’s prose is a joy. His word choices fill your mind with vivid pictures, and you are completely transported into the medieval world he created.

There are not many writer’s known by one name. Now I know why, and will definitely want to read or listen to more of his books.

Believe!

Karen Centofanti

Aug

23

Forbes’ Highest-Paid Authors

 YOUR CHECK IS IN THE MAIL I’M SURE!

My hope is you do not spend the money too quickly, and that you made as much as the following authors made over the 12 months ending June 1:

James Patterson ($70 million)
Stephenie Meyer ($40 million)
Stephen King ($34 million)
Danielle Steel ($32 million)
Ken Follett ($20 million)
Dean Koontz ($18 million)
Janet Evanovich ($16 million)
John Grisham ($15 million)
Nicholas Sparks ($14 million)
JK Rowling ($10 million)

CHEERS,
JOAN

Aug

22

I want to share two openings to my picture book Beana.

The first opening is in third person present tense.

The second opening shows more of Beana’s personality, and it is written in first person past tense.

Write your opening lines in third person, then switch to first person. Judge for yourself which voice makes your character come alive.

Sample 1 -3rd person present tense:

            Beana leaps into the car with the dog shelter attendant after she is invited for a second visit to Grammy Aly and Grampy George’s home.

            Today is Beana’s big chance to get out of Homeless Pups.

            When the car stops, Beana splashes through puddles on her way to Grammy’s front porch.

            “Grammy, I hope you enjoy Beana,” says the attendant. “Beana, remember your manners.”

            Beana is not listening. She rockets down the hallway in a tailspin, leaving muddy paw prints on Grammy’s new rug. She jumps on an empty chair and runs across the dining room table. CRASH!  She knocks over two glasses of cranberry juice, before she plops herself on Grampy’s lap.

            Grampy gives Beana nose-to-nose love, as she slobbers him with a wave of wet kisses.

Sample 2- 1st person past tense:

                      I hated living at Homeless Pups.

            The dog shelter attendant told me I was invited to Grammy Aly and Grampy George’s house, for a second home visit.

            I leaped into the car as fast as I could.

            When the car stopped, I splashed through four mud puddles that wouldn’t get out of my way.

            Grammy stood on her front porch waving both hands at me.

            The attendant called to us as she left, “I hope you enjoy Beana, and Beana, remember your manners.”

            I forgot to listen as I rocketed down the hallway in a tailspin, leaving muddy paw prints on Grammy’s new rug.

            Grampy was seated at the dining room table twirling his mustache.

            The fastest way to Grampy was to jump onto an empty chair and run across the dining room table.

            CRASH! Two glasses of cranberry juice were in my way.

            I leaped onto Grampy’s lap,

            He gave me nose-to-nose love, while I slobbered him with a wave of wet kisses.

Joan

Aug

22

Thursday, August 12, 2010

Christina Laurie

                   All my life I have been a writer. As a ten-year-old kid I would take my notebook and pencil into the woods and write the most extra ordinary stories. Unfortunately I never finished them, so today as I read them I have no idea what was in my mind at that time. And, being written in pencil, many are illegible. But they sound creative.

          As a teen, I loved our high school Friday English assignments for compositions, and later wrote in journals about my children as they grew up.

Recently I began looking at how I began writing SERIOUSLY, as a real job. Although my newspaper work was beneficial in forming me as a writer, I think it was when I finally confirmed that, although I was not yet making money, I was, indeed, a professional writer.

In rereading Natalie Goldberg’s classic “Writing Down the Bones”, I was reminded of how important it is to make a conscious decision to write. I did this in a number of ways.

          First, I created a writing space with my computer, dictionaries, research and writing books, notebooks, and utensils (paper, pen, clip board, etc). This has become full room with desk, bookcases and artist easel.

          Secondly, I read a couple of books on writing. Some had great ideas for starting writing or getting out of writers block. But at some point one must stop reading ABOUT writing and just WRITE. So I did.

          Thirdly, I cut out time in my weekly schedule to write a minimum two full days a week. So now when my son calls to ask if I can baby sit, I say, “Nope, that’s my writing afternoon.” And no one in my family asks me to sit on Friday because they all know that Friday is my writing DAY.

          Next, I began a journal and gave myself permission NOT to write in it every day. That relieved the pressure and guilt, and frees me up to write two or three things in a day and then skip for several.

          Fourth, I have two one-hour spots in the week where I “clean up” my study – usually just before the cleaning lady comes. This keeps my study area neat and uncluttered. (But don’t come to look today!!!)

          Finally I have a list of ideas. Some are just sentences, some poems, some outlines, newspaper articles, sentences from a book or article . If I am stumped, I will go to that folder, but usually I don’t need it. It’s a golden box of future stories, poems or mysteries.

          Writing is a lonely occupation at times. We need to be holed up with our computer and just write. However, I never sit more than two hours without taking a break. I get coffee, sit and read, weed the garden, clean the toilets, hang out the laundry, swim or walk in the woods or on the beach.

          Not only does this get me out of the sitting position, which is not the best to be in for long periods of time. It gives me exercise, fresh air in my lungs, and moves me from physically typing to thinking about what comes next.

          Good luck on your own writing.

Christina

Books I recommend:

Writing Down the Bones, Natalie Goldberg

The Artist’s Way, Julia Cameron

Art and Fear, David Bayles and Ted Orland
Writing Picture Books, Ann Whitford Paul

Write Your Heart Out, Rebecca McClanahan

Aug

20

I have always heard that a writer should “write what you know”. Until today…

 I started a new book, Writing the Breakout Novel by Donald Maass, with a foreword written by Anne Perry. Ms. Perry, in answer to the question, “Is it true you should write what you know about?” replies: “No, write what you care about. If you don’t know, you’ll find out. But if you don’t care, why should anyone else?”

 Good point, I thought. I have always felt that a writer needs to feel passionate about his/her story in order to grab the reader’s lasting attention.

 I find I do my best writing when I can lose myself in the story and the characters. They start to take on a life of their own and the story takes off seemingly by their direction. Sometimes I even get to a place where it is like writing down a drama I am seeing and hearing in my head. It just flows forth like magic. How heavenly.

 So, yes, I agree with Ms. Perry. It is essential that writers “care” about what they are writing. It is probably a good idea to write what they know as well.

 Angel Blessings, Susan

Aug

19

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  • Joan

    Aug

    18

    Greetings:
    Stop and think for a moment about whether you have been speeding through the publishing process. If as writers we get too caught up in the need to sell our manuscript rather than in perfecting it, the process will backfire. Stop writing and read! Take time to study how-to books like, HOW TO WRITE A BOOK PROPOSAL by Michael Larson. In the long run, you will save time because improperly written proposals and manuscripts will result in rejections. Keep in mind, a rejection doesn’t mean your work has no merit. Visit websites for current rules for publishing. What isn’t chosen by one editor may be welcomed by another, so don’t waste precious time sending a juvenile story to a publisher or agent who doesn’t accept juvenile stories! Go to your local bookstore or library and connect with books like CHILDREN’S WRITERS & ILLUSTRATORS MARKET edited by Alice Pope. Most importantly, connect with the children’s books being published now. Children’s tastes change, as does the market.
    The waiting game between send-out and acceptance or rejection is best spent in perfecting writing skills on another project. Editors don’t need problems; they want the best you can give them and they will—if they spy a gleam of talent there—pay more for it if there are no problems. So how can you tell when the work is good enough? Put it away for a week or so and then re-read it aloud. Trust your instincts. Is it really as good as you thought it was on first completion? Use your computer’s grammar and spell-check, and PLEASE make sure the editor’s name is spelled correctly. The general consensus is if you didn’t care enough to spell the editor’s name right, you don’t care enough about details.
    When it’s finally the best you can do, provide the editor with a word count to give a sense of the book’s size. Don’t be too concerned with the number of pages; that’s the editor’s job. For example, non-fiction manuscripts usually run from 50,000 to 100,000 words and between two hundred and four hundred pages. The length of your book will be listed in your contract. And speaking of contracts, they are NOT all the same. I rejected a contract on my non-fiction memoir because the editor wanted “World Rights”. In other words, I would have no further say about my own manuscript because it would no longer belong to me. Read up on those rights. For example, “First North American Rights” means that after your book is published, the rights return to you and the publisher is allowed to market the book only in North America. It’s a good idea to become familiar with such details.
    Years ago, a pessimistic Manhattan publisher told me “…unless one is famous or notorious, it’s doubtful your book will be accepted because the bottom line is profit. Where adult titles sell millions, the average range of sale for a good young children’s book is two hundred and fifty thousand. Big difference.” Good thing J.K Rowling didn’t listen to him! Good thing I didn’t listen to him, either, or my children’s book, WERFUL AND THE CAPTAIN wouldn’t be displayed in the window of EIGHT COUSINS book store in Falmouth center now. Once you are published, marketing one’s own book is essential today. Use every means at your disposal like radio programs, public TV, newspaper ads, or even note it in a blog! Most of all, write something every day, even if it’s only a sentence. Every book begins with one.
    Have a fun day and smile at a child; it feels good. Linda

    Aug

    17

    Last night I attended the 48th Annual Cape Cod Writers Center Conference: Books, Bytes and Beach in Centerville, Cape Cod Massachusetts. The evening session’s Keynote speaker was none other than the prominent radio and television personality, Jordan Rich, WBZ’s News Radio host since 1996.  His weekend late nights at WBZ are heard throughout the United States, reaching 38 states, Canada and are worldwide on the internet.

    Jordan Rich was delightful; his message was filled with encouragement, practical advice and posed a challenge.  He talked with us about the need for newly “sprouting” author’s to invest in connecting with the media in order to broadcast information about the publication of their work and for us to realize it is not impossible to get a fifteen (15) minute segment with him.  He said he works frequently with best-selling authors, film and TV stars, entertainers and celebrities but has somehow become known as the one who will make it a point to interview the authors.  He believes this has happened because he one (1) takes time to actually read various authors’ books and two (2) he especially enjoys discovering “the story behind the story”.  It is very clear that Jordan Rich has a true love for people!  He purposes to find what makes people tick by dialoguing with them to learn the intent and purpose of each writer’s book and how their background plays into the creative story.

    He shared some practical advice about being ready to give the “30 second elevator pitch” when the moment comes.  He said it is important to do e-mailing and blogging, be in a writers group and on Face-book and have a one-page press release ready to promote our book.   We authors must be keyed in and ambitious with the media in order to receive the optimal benefits and success of our books, whether they are self-published or we have a publisher.

    His parting message was a touching analogy of two bodies of water; one being a rushing flow of water, full of life-giving properties the other being stagnant, still and dead.  He reminded us that we, the communicators, have a legacy to leave….which prompted the question we all must answer……what legacy do I want to leave? 

    When I spend time writing and blogging and being a part of the Cape Cod Children’s Writers critique group, my greatest hope and desire is that my life, my relationships, my publications, my children’s books WILL make a difference in the hearts of children and people around the world.  Tomorrow I turn fifty-three (53), yet as early as four (4) years old, I used to go out to my swing set and swing for hours singing and thinking about what I could do in this world to love and help people.  I have always cared at a very deep level that people know they are loved and needed.  Today, as you read this blog, my greatest gift would be for you to know how treasured and precious you are and that I care about how your life turns out. God bless you ……saying good-bye for now…. love, jeannie Purpaleanie!

    Aug

    13

     

    I am nearly finished reading The First Five Pages, A Writer’s Guide to Staying out of the Rejection Pile by Noah Lukeman (27 pages to go).

      While the book is not geared particularly to writers of children’s books, it is packed with valuable information, suggestions and end-of-chapter exercises.  Mr. Lukeman includes writing examples which work as well as those that don’t—very helpful.

     I find myself wondering how I could ever possibly master presentation, style, showing vs. telling, viewpoint and narration, characterization, dialogue, hooks, subtlety, tone, focus, setting, pacing and progression—just some of the chapter topics. And if I did, would it be enough? Or is there something else required? Innate talent perhaps?

    Neverthelsess, if the writer’s bug has bit you, you just gotta write. So write for the joy of it! In my opinion, that is a worthwhile goal. And if the day comes when you “get published”—icing on the cake!

     Angel Blessings, Susan

    Aug

    11

    Etymology: A Writer’s Friend
    Greetings;
    Etymology–the study of the origin and development of words. The Oxford English Dictionary is a historical dictionary, which numbers and lists definitions from the oldest to the newest while American dictionaries list definitions from the most to the least used. The OED gives one a different perspective into how and why meanings develop. The true meaning of “dead as a doornail” becomes clearer when you understand the origin of the doornail. Words like “discard” evolve into more than a card thrown away. In today’s language, it means throwing away anything not needed—a far cry from its original intent. (I’m para-phrasing from Professor Bill Roorbach’s amazing book, WRITING LIFE STORIES, to make a definite point.) When you, the writer, becomes more aware of words, you can provide the reader with in-depth insight into a characters’ personalities, specific scenes, and/or time. Hence, similes and metaphors sprinkled in among  prose or poetry provides the reader with a better feel for what your story is about. One classic book beginning, “It was the best of times. It was the worst of times.” lets the reader know, immediately, there will be a wide range of happenings. (I could mention the book title, but readers like providing answers on their own. In a children’s story, rather than telling that your main character is ten years old, make him a fifth grader so readers can take the clue and decide age by themselves.)
    What makes one writer’s work better than the mundane is her or his unique coupling of words. (I switched the usual use of the coupling “his or her” to give it more in-depth meaning.  Did you notice whether the words wafted through your mind as easily? Was there an instant when your mind paused to consider, is the writer making a point? I was.
    Try this exercise. Take a scene that you wrote a while ago and sprinkle in a few similes and/or metaphors. It doesn’t have to make sense in the beginning, but as you progress, consider the word couplings you are choosing. Where did they come FROM? (I know one is not supposed to end a sentence with a preposition, but it’s my thought and, again, I’m making a point.) The right way isn’t always the best way. Of course, you must first learn the right way before being able to make a definite point. Famous writers get away with it all the time and critics call it “style”!
    Be aware that your use of simile or metaphor (creative thought) may have been triggered by a feeling, scent, or person who, now or long ago, affected you. Utilize those real happenings to give your story life. If I write, “I hated his smile. It twisted inside me like a writhing snake,” I am using a word picture to “show” the reader how the man made the woman in the story feel, and because feelings often originate from actual experiences, the situations become more realistic. It’s what a good writer accomplishes for their reader. When all that works, you have succeeded in making a new friend, one who will buy your books.
    Be well and have fun today.   Linda

    Aug

    8

     

    When you think about story writing think:

    1.      Premise: Who is the story about?

     2.      Inciting incident:  What happens to rock the main character’s world?

     3.      Conflict:  How does the inciting incident make your main 

    character behave?

     4.      Character motivation:  What life experience causes your   main character to react to the inciting incident in his or her unique way?

    If you feel like you are in a therapy session, you know you’re on the right track.

    Joan

    Aug

    7

    So, a couple weeks ago I posted a writing contest.  You all have informed me by various means that you need more time than I give.  Next time I promise to give at least two weeks.  Karen is still declared the ultimate winner of round two.  I love the personality she created.  Below are two recently received entries.  I thought we could discuss them today. 

    1. The smell of bacon cooking with roasted pineapples eased me out of a deep sleep. I grabbed a candlestick to light my way. Walking through the rough walkway I tripped on an old toy robot. Fortunately, the aroma of fresh coffee brewing grabbed my attention. It’s all good again.
    by Marie Woods

    Wow, sensory skills in use here.  I love the word roasted with pineapples, I don’t usually think of pineapples this way I can see the sugar caramelizing on them.  (Dinner tonight, maybe?) Marie tells the story of my pre-caffeinated mornings, so I can connect.  One thing to work on; I am not sure where I am.  Some suggestions; add to light my way (through the graveyard, demolished living room ect.  Another place could be attached to the robot.  Like changing “an” to” my”, now I am thinking that I’m in a familiar, yet unfamiliarplace  creating a feeling of nostalgia.  I like how you use humor to describe your characters rebound.       

    Marie, Great work here.  I really hope you enter the next contest (posted in two weeks). 

    2. One cloudy day the rough wind tore the shingles from the deserted Cape type house. Helena moved like a robot picking them up as she popped sweet pineapple slices into her mouth. Tonight she would need a candlestick to see.

    By Christina Laurie

    Christina tried the minimalist approach.  She used 39 words and snuck in the six required words effortlessly.  What I like; using a a noun robot as an adjective.  Great twist.  It makes the reader really see more of Helena.  It is very direct.  I like that. Is it possible to use the last 11 words to create more drama?  Not that you need to, but want to. 

    Aug

    6

    I wrote my first book as a middle grade novel and thought my second would be one also. Now I am not so sure…

     Recently I read a “Ramona” book and previously was enchanted by “Clementine”—both chapter books. Perhaps Izzy B, age 10, the main character of my new book, should come to life in a chapter book rather than a middle grade novel… As I write I am thinking a chapter book (for ages 7 to 10) feels more appropriate than a middle grade novel (for ages 9 to 12)…

     And my new book continues to evolve, idea by idea.

     Angel Blessings, Susan

    Aug

    5

    Wow!
    It’s Thursday already again! All week I have been a counselor at the West Falmouth United Methodist Church Vacation Bible School (VBS). Each day we gather from 9 a.m. to noon for songs, bible stories, games and refreshments. Each day is focused on a theme which includes stories about the disciple Peter. The first day was Accepted by Jesus. The following days were: Protected by Jesus, Saved by Jesus, Forgiven by Jesus and, tomorrow, Living for Jesus.
    Each day builds on the day(s) before with bible stories. It’s been a fun week for the 18 kids that have attnded. I have contributed two of those kids – my grandsons, Cooper, 7, and Trevor, who turned 5 on Wednesday. After Bible Camp was over, we three, Cooper, Trevor and I, had special things we did each day: aquarium, library, crafts day, beach and one glorious quiet day at home. We have read “The Wizard of Oz” and spent time watching the trees sway as we rocked in the hammock. (Good Nana time for resting!!!)
    I want to say that I have tremendous love and respect for my daughter and two daughters-in-law and their patience, love and forbearance with their kids – my seven grandchildren. It’s been a fun week, but I have to say that I am exhausted – with one more day to go.
    Mothers are someone special. They dedicate themselves without care to their own needs. They care for kids, husband, house, car, racing from one schedule to another. They listen, hug, paste band aids, read, pray, and a host of other things. Mothers are absolutely great! Now I know why mothering is for the young and grandmothers are the “sometime” care givers who give relief to the mothers when they need a moment or day of rest. This week has given me a new appreciation for the work that mothers do each day, 24/7, with little or no thanks.
    So I say thanks to moms today. It’s been a great week, but I’m glad it’s just a week. I am too old and tired for much more!!!

    Aug

    4

    Greetings;
    Writers. Is there something on your mind that won’t go away? Do you too often feel like you’re rushing through life in staccato, trying to keep up with others’ needs? Your writing is placed on hold while mundane tasks like food shopping, doctor and dentist visits and laundry rule? If so, these thoughts are for you. STOP! Here’s that fifteen-minute-all-your-own exercise again. I can’t say it enough. Walt Whitman put it better with, “…I lean and loafe at my ease observing a spear of summer grass.”
    “What?” you may say, not understanding in our modern, hectic world, what he even means. We’ve become so involved with speed-living that we forget to take a deep breath, sit down somewhere—be it a park, a tub, on a beach, (you get the point) and simply observe, for a few minutes, because it isn’t action that gives meaning, it’s the thing behind the action—our subconscious yearnings and memories which so influence our writing. (Did you catch that within this prose there is a one-word sentence and one which spans over fifty words? Vary sentence lengths so your reader doesn’t become bored with sameness. I digress, but in growing older, it becomes more important to set down clues to good writing before I forget them!)
    What would you answer if I asked you, “What have you been thinking about?” and I don’t mean the surface stuff of what to have for dinner,. Only when the body is physically and emotionally at rest (eg: in bed alone or anywhere alone for that matter) can a sub-conscious desire, unique thought, or memory speak to us. During our too-busy hours, it’s unable to squeeze through into consciousness and as such is left imprisoned in our soul. I can’t create new ideas or resurrect and deal with painful memories, or enjoy happy-time memories if I don’t take the time to listen to ME! I want you to feel important enough to listen to YOU! Little changes can make a difference, like turning off the radio, the TV, the phone. If in a restaurant, place your children in a booth of their own and you sit nearby alone. They love it. Please think about it.
    Be well. Linda

    Aug

    3

    I spent many hours during our summers on Cape Cod in Cotuit reading children’s books to my four children as they were growing up.   Sometimes we needed down time from the hot sun and the busyness of our schedules or visitors.  Sometimes we just needed cuddling up before nap time to ease into a peaceful rest, while other times it was the perfect antidote to keeping life interesting on rainy days.  Whatever the case, one of my favorite stories to read was a chapter book titled: Hinds’ Feet on High Places: Delightfully Illustrated and Arranged For Children By: Hannah Hurnard printed by Destiny Image.  I have a hard copy but it is available now only in paperback. The front cover has a picture of a young girl in a pink dress with a man standing with her surrounded by friendly animals of the forest.  It is a story about a girl named “Much Afraid” who needs to leave the “Valley of Fear” and endure much sorrow and suffering to get to her purposed destination in life. It challenges a person’s thoughts, motives, fears, anxieties and longings in a way like none other and yet brings hope beyond measure. Included at the end of every chapter is a Christian devotional with questions for children to ponder and respond orally or written.  I have never found a book available on the market that is more profound for both an adult and child that develops such deep character and spiritual growth and can be read year after year bringing forth more depth and insight continuously.  It still remains my favorite children’s book of all time. I hope you will take the opportunity to discover its’ treasures! As we usher in the month of August, my favorite month of the year, I hope you will continue to make wonderful memories for your children and loved ones reading and playing together. God’s blessings to you…..jeannie Purpaleanie

    Aug

    2

    A year ago, I started writing a story that ended up becoming a short chapter book, similar in size to the Horrible Harry and Junie B. Jones books. The ideas kept coming, and I could hardly keep up with my thoughts as I wrote.

    Prior to this, I was only writing picture books. Now I needed to learn more about chapter books, middle grade and young adult novels.

    I went online and downloaded a copy of the Newbery winners and honor books, and I have been working my way through the list. The problem was the time it took to read each book. My solution? I listen to them on CD in my car. Everywhere I go, whether on a short errand, or a longer drive, I’m happily listening to a great book, hoping to absorb the language, pacing, and plot lines of these award-winning authors. I have read and/or listened to many MG and YA books this past year.

    Right now, I’m listening to Joey Pigza Loses Control by Jack Gantos. This book won a Newbery Honor award in 2000. It is the second book in his series about Joey Pigza, a young adolescent with ADHD and divorced parents. The recording is wonderfully narrated by Jack Gantos, which is a special treat, hearing him read the words he wrote.

    Most of the books on CD are narrated by a stage actor or actress, and some are better than others. I have rarely been so unhappy with a recording that I stopped listening. Most of the time I’m lost in the world of the book, hoping not to miss my exit!

    What are you waiting for? Get started and

    Believe!

    Karen Centofanti

    Aug

    1

     

    Avid readers and writers continue to appreciate the value of independent bookstores that provide a sense of community

    I would like to thank Books By the Sea of Osterville, MA for the lovely display of Christina Laurie’s book entitled Seasons Rising: A Collection of Haiku. booksbythesea@verizon.net

    I would also like to thank Eight Cousins of Falmouth, MA for the lovely display of Linda Williams’s picture book entitled Werful and The Captain.      cousin8@eightcousins.com

    Your recognition of community artists is greatly appreciated.

    Joan Walsh                 http://www.capecodchildrenswriters.com

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