May

3

“And that is why, when it’s time to make a change in my life, I just BEGIN.

Even if I’m starting in the wrong place. On the wrong project.

I simply BEGIN.

ACTION is magical. Somehow, action leads to clarity. Begin somewhere and just pay attention to the results you get. Then, refine your actions to accommodate what you have learned.

This is the most profoundly simple strategy I discovered about reinventing your life.

Begin.

Then, notice. Adjust.

And, begin anew.”

~ Jennifer Boykin – Breakthrough

Nearing the end of finishing my drawings for my illustrating project, as I look back to January, these were perhaps the most motivating words I’ve ever heard in regard to starting something new. There is a certain kind of fear I associate with starting something I’ve never done before. It’s the fear that keeps me from beginning.

This kind of fear has a process all it’s own. I wake up and immediately think about the new thing. Then I sit and think about it for a long time. I begin to stir up some confidence, so I gather the tools and materials I’ll need. The tools and materials all laid out, ready to go, snaps me back to the place of fear. I sit and think some more. I picture myself (in the illustrating case) putting the pencil to the paper. The fear rushes in again and I back away and think about it some more. Them I drop it completely and go do other things.

Gradually I begin thinking about it again. I imagine the finished product. I plan it. But that “snap” that I need to actually begin hasn’t hit yet. Thank goodness I found Jennifer Boykin’s Breakthrough . I never imagined it was that simple. Just begin.

Oh it’s simple, but it’s not easy. I had to adopt the mindset that if it wasn’t good, I could just tear it up and start again. No one had to see it. No one but me would know it wasn’t good. But then I get to thinking what if it will never be good? What if I can’t do it? Nonsense. I can do anything I put my mind to.

So I begin. And it isn’t bad. But it isn’t good either. I do tear it up and start again. Gradually I learn not to keep tearing it up. I find that if I push on through I gain an understanding of the medium and what I can do to fix things I don’t like. I learn the boundaries of the medium. I learn how the color works. I learn how the paper receives the color. And before I know it, I have a completed piece of artwork. I think it’s good, but what if it really isn’t?

Now I have to show it to people. And I HAVE to because I have to know if it’s honestly good. So I show it to people I trust and my critique group. It’s well received and I feel relieved.

I do the next two pages and then I show it to my biggest critic who I know will never lie to me, my teacher daughter. And what does she say? Mom, it’s the eyes of the characters. They need to be symmetrical and big. Look at any picture book. What’s the first thing you connect with? The eyes.

Wow. I never knew. So I worked on the eyes. In fact, I developed a whole new system for doing eyes. I leave them until last and cut them out of white paper and try them on the character. This gives me tremendous freedom in experimenting with the feeling the character is going to convey. I can make as many sets of eyes as I like until it’s just right, and if I trace them, they’ll all be the same size. The difference it made in my work was amazing. I finally felt it. It was good. Good enough to send to the author.

Who knew it was all in the eyes? Not me. Smart girl that daughter of mine. Smart as she is, I still would’ve not known this if I didn’t “just begin”.

Are you faced with something new? Just begin.

And so, as another day goes by, “just begin” is my mantra of the month, and…I have written.
The name of the book is The Trouble With Ralph. Here he is stealing the sheets. Does he look guilty? It’s all in the eyes.

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Apr

16

This morning I got up and set to work going out to do what I needed to do today along with all the other Bostonians all around me. A friend of mine wrote a blog entitled Finding Perspective that I read just before leaving the house. Not being up here in the city or being connected to anyone involved, she was having a hard time putting a lens on this tragic event. I so understood her. Even though I felt a connection because I was here and my daughter was walking home on the streets of Boston during the event, trying to find perspective on why an eight year old boy had to die hugging his father as he crossed the finish line lies beyond a boundary we cannot fathom.

When it came time for me to leave the house I had a perspective through which I was going to view my day. It turned out that I also had a connection to the eight year old that died. He and his family are friends of someone in my bible study group and I received an email requesting prayer. So I prayed. But now what? Now I go to work. Today I had the pleasure of spending the better part of my day with eight and nine year olds that are very much alive. Alive, and full of questions and comments over this horrific act. My job today was to give my time and attention to them.

Today was day two of my Young Authors Workshop here in Boston. The children bounced into the room already to dig in. They had a great time yesterday and had unfinished stories, poems, and illustrations in their Work In Progress folders that they were anxious to get to. When they entered the room I had some instrumental music playing and told them that meant a quiet time to spend with their Writers Notebook. Yesterday we learned about four things we could put in our notebooks. One was “fierce wonderings”, meaning things we see and hear that just won’t leave our brains. Things that we think about over and over in our mind. Four out of the six children wrote about the sad event, describing what had happened. It was a gentle way of letting them quiet their nagging minds. There, it was dealt with. Time to move on.

We proceeded with the topics for today and pretty soon they were busy and engaged in writing “Nutsy News Stories”, quietly putting aside the tragic one. It was a fun project. First they had to cut 25 words out of a newspaper. Then they had to arrange the words into a goofy headline such as “Arlington Volleyballs Lost Their Butter” and proceed to write the news stories to go with the headline. Needless to say we were giggling from the get-go. The day ended on a high note with everyone smiling and feeling extremely accomplished.

My mission? Also accomplished. In the wake of the devastation, I jumped into the morning commute alongside the Bostonians and validated their persistence and strength in the face of such a thing. The tragedy caused me to view the job I had to do today just a little more importantly and with a bit more focus than yesterday.

And so, as another day goes by, I’ll leave you wondering about butter and volleyballs, the children were taken care of, I feel extreme peace tonight, and… I have written (and maybe found some perspective).
Fully engaged!

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Apr

11

If you click on the “I Practice” icon in the upper left of my blog page, (link for those reading on the Cape Cod Children’s Writers page)

Another Day Goes By

you will be amazed at the wonderful writing education you could get at this site. I get them emailed to me everyday and I am constantly amazed at the simple, yet so important, things I have learned to improve my writing. If you took 15 minutes and did each daily exercise it would be like being in a perpetual writing course.

Today’s was so good I had to highlight it for all my writing buddies. There are four words – so very simple ones, that sneak into your prose, and, without you realizing it, just sabotage the quality of your writing. Did you see them? I just used all four in the preceding sentence and I bet you can’t pick them out. That’s how subtle they are. As I keep writing, they keep popping up. Oh, what’s a writer to do with these sneaks? The link below shows you how remove them and strengthen your writing.

If you want to know what the four words are, follow this link and begin performing major surgery on your best pieces. Once you know what the four words are, come back and see how many I’ve used in this post. Aghhh! Lol! (FYI – I didn’t put them in on purpose – I just wrote it! – Sneaky!)

Four Words That Are Killing Your Prose

And so, as another day goes by, how many things sneak into our days and sabotage us, needing to be cut out, and…I have written.

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Mar

2

When new things appear on my radar that require me to put in more spiritual work to deal with, I tend to focus on one aspect of the situation until the focus becomes my focus and I lose perspective entirely. My picture book illustrating project has taught me much about dealing with the things life throws our way by stepping back and regaining that perspective.

I’m done with the book cover and almost done with the first page. I’m using oil pastels and am having a wonderful time pushing color around a page with my fingers and various other objects I find around the house, such as Q-Tips and nail files. The backgrounds are particularly challenging. My face will be so close to the paper as I work the colors together to blend and put shadows and spears of light where they belong, that I sometimes think it’s not quite right. I’m focusing on each little spec and stroke and think to myself, this isn’t how I wanted it to look. In my mind I picture a beautifully blended background of color, but up close it isn’t measuring up. Then my shoulders ache and I back way and I sit up straight. I look at the picture and am in awe of how it comes together. I tack it up on a bulletin board in my kitchen and spend a lot of time looking at it from across the room and thinking, yes, I like it. It is right. How different it looks in it’s magnificent entirety. I spend more time looking at it while I do other things around the house. I notice things that need to be touched up, added or changed. I would not see these little tweaks or the magnificence of the whole picture if my nose was 5 inches from the page and too focused on one aspect of the color.

This project has taught me to step back. Not react. Get a full perspective and spend time waking around it from afar. If being an illustrator has taught me anything, it’s taught me about being in control of myself, as well as the crayon, and not to start scribbling furiously when sunflares cross my radar. (Yes, the sunflares were over by 3 pm yesterday, but they, too, left their mark.) Instead of grabbing my phone and hurling into action, I stand back and stay quiet and look at things from afar. I see the tweaks, but I recognize the beauty of the scene in its entirety.

And so, as another day goes by, it’s hard. Hard to remain quiet and still. It is where true courage to get the job done sometimes lies, and….I have written.

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Jan

26

While cleaning out the magazine holder I came across a crinkled copy of Writer Magazine from 2010. It was folded to page 12, indicating I must have been reading something of interest when I set it down two years ago. I questioned the importance of the article since I never returned to it. Curiosity got the best of me and I sat there on the floor, in the middle of all the stacks of magazines and read the article. Ah..ha. Now I know why it was not important enough to return to back then – two years ago I was barely a writer and this article wouldn’t have meant too much to me. But now……

…after growing as writer over the past two years I have developed writing routines. I know myself as a writer. I know what makes me want to write. I know what time of day is best for me to write. My writing life just developed out of a soft rhythm to my days. I didn’t force myself to sit down and write. I didn’t schedule any time to write each day. I just lived and let it happen, so now I have my own personal writing process. That’s the reason an article about writers learning to develop the mental toughness needed for their craft from athletes couldn’t mean much to a person who hadn’t actually written anything but the first ten posts to this blog.

Now these four tips athletes use to get in their game and stay there mean a lot to me.

First, athletes develop a routine. They do a series of rituals like exercising, eating or drinking something special – just to let their body know they are about to enter competition mode. I now see that I do this. I watch the news. Eat lunch. Nap for a few minutes. Have a cup of afternoon coffee, and soon my fingers are flying and my mind is racing and I couldn’t stop it if I tried. That’s how this blog gets written everyday.

Second, athletes stay in the present. Allowing past failures or future worries to enter the competition with them would hinder their game. When I’m writing I’m totally in the world of what’s going on on the keyboard. I’m not worrying about who my audience is or comparing my present work to past or future projects. It’s what’s in my mind at this moment that needs to come out, that counts.

Third, the article talked about golfers staying “inside the ropes”. When in a competition they are just a golfer. Their roles as parents, spouses, etc. do not enter inside that game. I get that. When I’m writing furiously I don’t notice the sun went down and the room has grown dark. I don’t check my phone or answer texts. I don’t notice I’m really hungry and I should stop and eat. I don’t wonder about what my husband and/or kids are doing at the moment. I’m not a wife and mother or teacher when I’m writing. I’m just a person that the universe grabbed for a period of time and is shooting information through. When it’s over, I’m spent, usually hungry and ready to be a wife and mom again.

Fourth, athletes set goals. Setting goals helps them stay focused. For me, a bulletin board in my kitchen holds pieces of my latest project. (Right now it’s covered with sketches of goats – the hero in a book I’m illustrating) This keeps me focused daily because it’s the first thing I see when I’m pouring my morning tea and right away I decide what I need to do for the day, and sometimes the week. Obviously finishing illustrating the book is the goal, but it’s what the article called “intermittent goals” that keep me on track daily.

The fifth and last tip is athletes know what they can control and what they can’t. They know they can only control their own actions. Same for writers. Writers cannot control people’s opinions or reactions to their work. For me, I conquer this by telling myself a reaction, any reaction, positive or negative, is good. Just the fact that someone read my work and reacted to it means I did my job. My work prompted people to talk and think. It’s silence that kills the piece in my eyes, so even if you hate what I write or have a strong opposite opinion, please, please shout it out.

Yes, two years ago this article wouldn’t have held my interest due to the fact I probably didn’t understand just what the writing kind of life consisted of. If you are just stepping out in 2013 in a new direction, don’t worry about all you don’t know. Step by step, month by month, year by year, it will grow itself and one day all make sense.

And so, as another day goes by, lunch was yummy (hubby’s homemade chicken salad), newspaper was informative, nap was needed, coffee was hot and delicious and …voila! ..I have written.

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Nov

30

Last night I had a wonderful time sharing my writing with my critique group. Their comments and ideas sent me home high on inspiration. I walked in the door and left the manuscript on the counter. I danced around it all night and this morning – kind of scared of it, but yet excited about it. I didn’t know what my next step would be, so I just left it alone.

This morning my Bikram class was flawless. Flawless because I wasn’t even there for it. As soon as I put my clasped fingers under my chin and bent my head backwards to start the first breathing exercise, instead of seeing the white ceiling above me, I saw the the first line of my story. I became immersed in the lives and worlds of my characters. My story was playing out like a movie in my mind. I did a lot of writing in that ninety minute class. Descriptions and character names came easily to me. I was thoroughly enjoying myself as I floated from pose to pose. My good friend Shirley was the teacher and she has a rhythmic style that just let my mind free itself while my body conformed to her instructions.

By the time we were almost finished with the floor series I re-entered the atmosphere of the class. I marveled at how freely my mind worked as my body methodically moved through the poses. The more I thought about it, this was not that unusual. A good percentage of these blogs were written in my head during my yoga classes. It’s become apparent to me that yoga class is my place to write. Ideas are born and created during that moving meditation. My time to put them on paper occurs between two and five in the afternoon. More than two years of consistent yoga practice has developed and honed my writing process. I sit here amazed – not only at that, but also at the fact that until today, I never realized it.

You know how, when you begin a new thing, you’re always worried you’re doing it wrong? Each writer’s process is so unique to their own personality, that it makes the process quite random. I decided two years ago when I started this blog that I wasn’t going to push it or box myself in with “that’s how it’s supposed to be done” rules. I was just going to let my individual writing process grow itself. As I walked that path, I would find things written about the writing process that validated the way I was naturally doing things.

When I unearthed my manuscript yesterday afternoon there was a copy of an article in the folder that someone had handed out in my old writing group so long ago. It was about how to revise from a critique. It said:

“You have a big question mark in your brain: What are you supposed to DO with this stuff?
Take a breath. Remind yourself of a few important things:
-You don’t need to revise until you’re ready.
-Baby steps are a good way to begin.
-A comment is only a starting point.
-THINKING is a part of revision.
-This is YOUR book.
-You ASKED for feedback. “*

The one that hit me today is:

“Thinking is part of the revision. Revision is not all about writing and rewriting. It’s more about thinking. Your critique partners have pointed out plenty of big, messy knots in your manuscript. If you try to untangle those problems by simply changing a few words on the page, you’re going to get frustrated and angry. Get away from the computer. Go THINK about your story.”*

That is exactly what I did in yoga class this morning. The type of work I did on my story could not have been done on the computer. It was very freeing and inspiring, and, after reading this article, was nice to find out what I did naturally is what I’m supposed to be doing. I’m learning all writing work is not done on paper. Cool.

And so, as another day goes by, it’s also cool that when I go to yoga it’s a two for one deal – I’m working on my writing as well as my body, I never realized how much I did in those ninety minutes, and ….I have written.

*”How To Revise From A Critique” by Becky Levine, Writer’s Digest, October 2010.

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Nov

29

A year and a half ago I blogged about my first piece of writing. In April of 2011 I joined a fiction writing group and brought my first piece of writing ever, to have it critiqued. I took the criticism well. It turned out I had a great story, but it was so obvious I was a new writer. I could deal with this. This group hung together throughout the summer and I slowly began to realize that all new writers make the same type of mistakes. I also realized I was no where near even attempting a novel. Our group disbanded in September and we all went our separate ways. I took my beginning novel and put it away – until today.

I have been with the Cape Cod Children’s Writer’s – my new writing group – for about seven months now. After shelving the novel, I turned to picture book writing. I studied and learned from the wonderful writers and mentors in this group and have written six picture books and submitted the first for publication two weeks ago. Now, for some reason, that old novel has been knocking on my brain to come back out. (This is the writer’s process – the story always beckons you, you can never tell a story to come out because it’s time to get written now.)

This afternoon I sat with my first three pages I ever wrote and read all the comments my old writing group made. I remember how these comments were overwhelming and made not a whole lot of sense 18 months ago. Now, after almost two years of study, they make perfect sense. I also remember the writing process back then. I was, and always will be, the writer that sits down when my characters grab me and write furiously until I’m sweating, hungry, thirsty, and the house has grown dark around me. I never worry about the things I’ve since learned about crafting the novel (or the picture book) when the writing process has me in its grasp. I write the story and put it away. The writing is done.

After a good deal of time passes, the story begins to bang on the back of my brain at the most inopportune times – like when I’m raking leaves or washing the car. The banging gets louder until one day I give in and open the manuscript box and take out that incorrigible story, if just to silence the banging, because I know what comes next. Revision.

Revision is never as passionate and all-consuming as the initial writing, but it is exciting in a different way. When revising and reading my group’s comments I feel deep satisfaction in seeing where I was in my skill as a writer, and where I am today. The words don’t flow like they did in the writing part. Now the words challenge me. They want to be rearranged and crafted so they can convey the story to the reader even more intensely than in the initial writing.

Today, the revising of these first three pages reinforces the importance of having a critique group. There are things in this piece I know must be done, but I need fresh eyes and new ideas. Tonight I will bring these first pages and share them with my group. And while there was intense passion at 3 am when I wrote these pages, there is a new kind of passion in sharing them and working on them with my new group.

And so, as another day goes by, I love the randomness of a writing career, I love learning new things, and….I have written.

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Nov

15

Last night, at our Cape Cod Writers Center Writers Night Out in Hyannis, my dear friend, Christine Merser, was our guest speaker. Christine, owner of Blue Shoe Strategies marketing and the blog at Freesia Lane.com, gave a wonderful presentation on how writers can effectively use social media to get their work in front of your eyes.

The first medium she spoke about was Facebook. One of her first slides cautioned us to stop and think. She went on to say that sometimes we need to “think out of the box” and gave us great examples of people who have done that and how it can relate to writers. I pushed the pause button back at “stop and think”. That small sentence stuck with me and pelted my brain as I drove home. It again entered my mind during yoga this morning. (In fact, I was so lost in thought about that little sentence, that I barely knew I took a yoga class today – I’m not sure if that’s good or bad, but that’s another blog.)

Anyway, “stop and think” is the most disregarded and taken for granted tiny sentence. It’s an old cliche and I feel it’s been relegated to the back of the closet, until my friend brought it out last night and held it under the light to be examined. When she said, “When deciding how to market your work, the first thing you have to do is stop and think. Why did you write your book? Who is going to be interested in reading your book?”, lights in my brain began a slow blink.

That’s where I got stuck thinking about that little sentence. How much easier life would be if we applied that to everything we do in our lives. For example:

If you are signing up for yoga:
Why do I want to do yoga?
How it is going to benefit me?
Exactly what do I hope to gain from yoga?

How much better to approach a new activity if we have some goal in mind, some “reason for doing”, other than my friend said I should. Stopping and thinking before plunging into the next new thing provides a sort of clarity that may help us get through any difficulties that are inevitably going to arise in any new endeavor. When we hit a roadblock, or come to a fork in the road, having that goal preset will help us to decide what to do, instead of just sliding our back down the wall and slumping to the floor, thinking why did I ever think I could do this?

In my writing journey, which began three years ago, I flipped and floundered and questioned over and over why I ever thought I could do this. When the whole first year went by, without me ever writing a single word, I know now that if I had my reasons and goals preset, working my way out of that would have been a lot easier. Once I stopped to decide just what is it that I want to write and why do I want to write it, the last two years on this journey unfolded a lot easier. Despite the bumps, roadblocks, and forks in the road, at least I knew what I was trying to do and why I was trying to do it.

I found my voice in writing picture books that will help young children deal with family and social concepts they encounter in their young lives. Books that will inspire them to figure things out, deal with people, and believe they can achieve whatever goals they set for themselves. With that clear vision in mind, and the desire to continue helping children through education, I faced the odds of getting published without fear. Though the odds of me winning the lottery are better than me getting published (and if we remember my blog about what God shared about me ever winning the lottery, well..you get the picture), I face those odds and continue to do what it is I know I must do, as clearly delineated in my goals.

And now, for those of you who have walked this writing journey with me through this blog, I am proud to announce that very early this morning I hit the send button and sent my first query letter to a publisher. And that, just pushing that send button, was my goal. All the way through the writing of the book, researching the publishers, educating myself in the writing of the query, getting my work critiqued, the endless rewriting, – in front of me was the picture of my finger pushing that send button. The hours, the disappointments, the hitting of walls, the “I can’t do this” moments, were all conquered much easier with that goal clearly in front of me. I must admit, many times it was the real reason for not quitting.

Notice I didn’t set a goal of getting published. That is a thing I have no control over, even though I did my homework and followed every guideline to the letter. My clear goal was something I could absolutely, positively do, as long I did my due diligence.

If you take anything away from this blog today, take that. Whether it be health, fitness, nutrition, career, education, relationships – whatever it is you’re embarking upon – set a clear goal that you can absolutely reach, by just pausing before beginning your journey to “stop and think”.

And so, as another day goes by, I think a box of pumpkin K cups is a just reward for pushing that send button (did I mention I was obsessed with DD pumpkin coffee and I’m panicking that it will soon be gone?), today marks a milestone in my fledgling writing career, and…… I have written.

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Nov

6

. No, not saw your face. This is the first trip ever to NY or anywhere that I brought my writing project with me to work on. Driving down the Mass Pike that thought astounded me. What could that mean?
Now, you understand, that my writing is freelance and has no constraints or deadlines placed on it. There steps to follow such as spend a few years educating yourself, then, of course, you have to actually write the book. Next you have to belong to a good critique group and have your work evaluated by your peers. After months of this, you have to spend time researching publishing companies to find a good fit for your work. (And then about 30 more just like it). Finally you have to research and practice writing those query letters. It’s important to get those critiqued, too, if you’re new at this. None of this has any time constraints. How fast you do it depends on how much time you spend on it. How much time you spend on it depends about how serious you are about a writing career. There is no boss. There is no office. There are no set hours. The only thing that measures progress is your initiative.
For these reasons, I was surprised that I packed up my queries and manuscripts and carted them to NY with me today. I have to spend an extra day here due to a surprise routine doctor appointment tomorrow, and the first thing I thought of doing all day was working on my writing. You can see my fear. I fear I wasn’t as serious and invested in my work these past two years. The fact that I brought it on the road with me impulsively must be a shift in my priorities. Or, my productive day yesterday cleared so many obstacles and worries out of my way, that I am free to get down to real business and get the first book submitted.
One little unplanned action caused a major shift in attitude, intention, and confidence. I’m going to chalk it up to positive growth, kickstarted by the time change. I continue to feel changed for the better by the change, instead of plunging into the usual discombobulated state time changes bring.
How about you? Have you found yourself doing something that you hadn’t intended to do lately? What could it mean? A positive change? A new direction?
When you want to change, you make a decision.
And so, as another day goes by, it is now 4 o’clock when it’s supposed to be 5, I drove to NY to vote today, this is certainly a week of change, and…I have written.

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Jul

8

As the sun sets on Cape Cod, another 4th of July vacation comes to a close. All but one daughter has left, we had one last great beach time today, one last barbecue, and now, while hubby returns the other daughter to Boston, the remaining one and I will end the holiday with a movie and ice-cream.

There is something I’ve learned about my “writing self” this week. With days full of people and activity, much like they were when I was working, my mind was kept busy and occupied and had very little time for wandering thoughts and meditation. My mind has been on vacation, too. This morning I was going to run a quick errand. My husband offered to drive me, but I declined. I just felt the need for a little drive by myself. I turned on the radio and Ryan Seacrest’s Top 40 was bantering away on the local station. I always keep an inspirational CD in the player for times when the radio music isn’t cutting it. I was listening to a pop song, with my finger on the CD button. Finally I pushed it. It was the right choice. The meditative music quickly took me to a place I craved. I began to realize just how much time I spend alone and how much it means when it comes to writing. Being on the go with family and friends for almost a week, thoughts were bottled up and writing moments were precious and few.

Years ago my husband became my biggest cheerleader for my writing. He used to tell me I’m going to write children’s books when I retire and that I need to come live here, in an artist’s community, to do that. I would laugh and never take him seriously. If I wanted to write, I could write just as well in rural upstate NY as I could here. It wasn’t until I pushed that button that I finally got it. Everything I learned in Julia Cameron’s, The Artist Way, made sense on that little jaunt to the store. Muddling through my weeks alone creates the time for thoughts to cross my mind, linger, fly away, or become a piece of writing.

I was pleased to find that I did have a rhythm to my days and a regular writing time had begun to find it’s place in it. It took six days of not having that time to to notice that I write naturally everyday and sorely miss it and become a little unbalanced if it’s gone too long. I also learned that by confidently saying, out loud, “I’m a writer” when people ask what I do, really does make it come to fruition.

“Becoming” a writer happened naturally, over time, without me forcing it or worrying about it. I always felt it would happen in its own good time. Now I’m adopting the same philosophy about publishing. It, too, will happen in the space and time it’s supposed to while I learn the ropes of the publishing world.

And so, as another day goes by, in writing, as in life, slow and steady wins the race, stating clearly who you are inspires the confidence needed to do the job, and…I have written.

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Jun

20

Today the online women’s magazine, Cape Women Online, featured an article on my author and friend, Joan Walsh, the founder of the Cape Cod Children’s Writer’s group that I belong to. A year ago she was working very hard to get her book, Cape Cod Memory Makers Explore the Town of Falmouth, published. I stand in awe of Joan for never giving up. She got her book written, illustrated, and now, published. A huge investment of time, money, and painstaking work. Now, one year later, it sits on the bookshelves of many area stores.

What if Joan didn’t pursue her dream? A year would have gone by anyway and she’d still be in the same spot, without a published book.

This morning when I went to yoga class my friend, Shirley, was there. I hugged her and stood in awe of her. I hadn’t seen her in nine weeks because she was in teacher training in LA. Shirley blogged her journey each week and I felt like I was there with her. She accomplished a Herculean task both physically and mentally. A year ago Shirley was tossing around the idea of attending teacher training. Now, one year later, she stands in front of me a certified Bikram yoga teacher.

What if Shirley didn’t pursue her dream? The year would’ve gone by anyway, and she’d still be in the same spot, but not a certified teacher.

Today is June 20, 2012. Where do you want to be on June 20, 2013? Do you have a dream? Do you have a goal? Do you want to make a life change? Do you have a vision? Decide today to stop putting it off. Take the first step, no matter how small, toward it. Even if it’s only making a phone call, writing an inquiring email, searching the Internet, or even just writing down what you want to do and taping it up on the bathroom mirror.

You know the old saying – a journey of 1000 miles begins with a single step. I watched both of these women take their first step. They are both my heroes. Because of them, I took my first steps to writing and publishing my picture book and starting a small business to support that. By June 21, 2013, I want my book submitted to at least ten publishers and I’d like my business to be pulling in at least $4000 a month. The year IS going to go by anyway. It’s just a matter of where I want to be at the end of it.

Our journeys, theirs and mine, are not easy. There are obstacles along the way, but knowing that didn’t stop Joan and Shirley. They just put their boots on and started walking. Joan, Shirley, – thank you both for being such an inspiration to Cape women everywhere.

And so, as another day goes by, please check out Joan’s article in Cape Women Online (link below), think seriously about putting on those shoes and taking that first step along with me this year, and …I have written.

Cape Women Online

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Jun

5

Yesterday, an hour of what I have now deemed “my writing work time” was spent reading the author interviews in the Children’s Writers & Illustrators Market. This past week I have become obsessed with this book. I have read many “how to” books on everything from editing your own work to how to write a query letter to how to write a children’s picture book. While these books were especially helpful, there’s something special about the way the editor, Chuck Sambuchino, put the information every new writer wants to know, together in this book. If you are a new children’s writer or especially if you’re just thinking you might want to write for children (maybe because you always liked playing in the sandbox – and still do), I strongly suggest you start with this book. Expensive, at about $30, but priceless when it comes to the education it delivers in such a palpable way.

On this particular evening I was reading the author interviews. There’s no better place to gain writing knowledge than from the people who do it successfully for a living. The interviews are in depth, thoughtful, and so, so insightful. Many times I’ve attended author talks and signings where the author talks about their writing process. I often come away so inspired. The problem with the live talk is, it’s gone from my brain the next day. (Not the inspirational aura, but the exact facts that built that aura.) Reading the interviews in this book keeps these authors and their words in my house and in my hands. Like right now when I want to tell you something cool Ally Carter (Heist Society) said, I don’t have to wrack my forgetful brain. I can just turn to her interview and voila! – her inspirational words are right where I left them.

So, what did she say that sent me happily back to the sandbox and caused me to pick up my stylus and tap out this blog? She said:

“And, as you mentioned, there are more stakes overall – just more riding on me and the books – and on the days when the writing isn’t going well (which is most days, to tell you the truth), I long for the time when I was an unpublished writer – when it was me and a story and a pen and I could work at my own pace and for my own satisfaction. Really, that is a blessing, and I hate to see so many people wishing those days away like I did.”

Ally wishes she was back in the sandbox, where time and imagination were hers and hers alone. Through her success, she’s now a grown-up in the writing world, with grown-up responsibilities to her writing. She made me realize with this statement that I am having my time in the sandbox. She also made me stop and really love this season of my writing career. None of us, as new writers, knows how long our time to get to play with our pens and paints and wild and lovely characters in the sandbox will last.

Last night I was alone in my lovely cape cottage. My stories and pictures and characters were there with me. There is no pressure to finish them off and hurry to send them away. Thank you, Ally Carter, for inspiring me to enjoy this season of my writing career and for showing me it’s a special place, sort of like kindergarten, and that once you leave it, you can never go back to it again.

And so, as another day goes by, I appreciate and respect my time in the sandbox, and…I have written.

Jun

1

I’m beginning to feel, for the first time, that writing is my “job” now. I have set hours and lists of things to do. It’s a wonderful feeling to finally have this direction. Today I spent my first hour finishing researching all the publishing houses in the Children’s Writers and Illustrators Market book. Then, since it was a gorgeous cape afternoon, I decided to take myself on a field trip (artist date) and walk down to Titcomb’s Bookshop on 6A.

I spent my last two hours reading picture books and noting publishers. The exciting part was every book I found similar to mine, was published by one of three publishers, but the best thing was that due to my research, I actually remembered and recognized their names, where three days ago I wouldn’t have had a clue. I couldn’t wait to get back home and look them up and see if they were ones I had highlighted in the CWIM book.

On my walk back home I was reminded about something I read in that book:

“So you’ve written a book. And now you want an agent. If you’re new to publishing you probably assume that the next step is to send your finished, fabulous book out to agents, right? Wrong. Agents don’t want your finished, fabulous book. In fact, they probably don’t even want part of your finished, fabulous book – at least not yet. First they want your query.”
~Kara Gebhart Uhl

Today, after my field trip, I’m beginning to see why each author has to go through the process of researching the houses and figuring out how to write a good query letter. My own book is a product of my personality. My research and education on queries and publishing houses is going to reflect my book. My query letter, when I finally do write one, is going to be very personal to my work, as well as tailored to each publisher I choose to send it to. No one can do this for me. I have to go through the research process. No one can write my query letters. I am the one responsible for making a publisher feel I’m offering “a project that has a unique bent to it – be it subject matter, writing style, or illustrative technique” as stated by Chronicle Books in the CWIM. No one can do that for me.

I feel safe and secure in this journey because I have a wonderful support team in my colleagues on this site. They are all seasoned, published wonderful writers. (Please click on “Our Website” on the right, then go up to Meet Us on the toolbar and check out their bios.)
Though I know I have to be the one to do the work and put in the time, I also know they are there to ask for help when I hit the bumps in the road that I know for certain are there.

I always knew writing was a very personal process, but I never dreamed the “getting published” part was just as personal.

And so, as another day goes by, field trips are a fun part of this job, I love and appreciate my fellow writers on this site for showing me a writer’s journey is not a lonely one, and…I have written.

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May

31

During the past two weeks I have had what I call sort of a cart-before-the-horse experience on my writer’s journey. I recently wrote something that my colleagues thought had some substance to it and suggested I drop everything else and make this project my number one priority. Normally I wouldn’t have too much anxiety over this, but my project, by it’s very nature, places a submission time limit on itself. It is another children’s picture book, complete with illustrations.

The writing and illustrating of the book was the easy part. When I write, I go to a space that inspires me and makes me feel alive. When I sit down to begin the illustrations, I easily slip into the world where the story is taking place. The whole process is very relaxing and enlightening because I’ve learned when I first began this journey, placing time limits and restrictions on creativity just created anxiety instead of stories. I started this journey two and a half years ago and it is only within this past year I’ve learned to slow down and let my own writing process grow and develop.

Progress wise, I never expected to create anything with any kind of urgency to submit for publication so soon. I pushed the “how to” of publishing aside and refused to even take time with how to write a query letter or find a publishing house perfect for my book. I did research self-publishing, thinking it fit my internal timeline a little better.

Now I have this book. It needs to be submitted ASAP. (This would be the cart.) I’m overwhelmed. The amount of time and research required to learn to write a good query letter – one that will get an editor’s attention amid the “slush pile”, and find a suitable “house”, is something one gains over years of doing this. (That would’ve been the horse.)

Hmmm….I needed a plan. A colleague got me kickstarted. She suggested I set aside a time everyday to work on this project, set a timer, and at the end of the time write down what I accomplished. She saved me. Her suggestion lent structure to my day and gave me a concrete way to begin. Then a few days ago, a book an editor friend promised to send me arrived at just the right moment. It was a copy of the 2012 Children’s Writers and Illustrators Market. In it were examples of query letters and a current directory of all the children’s publishing houses.

My plan continues to unfold. I set aside 2pm to 5pm everyday to work on this project. The time includes rewrites of the story, but most important it includes studying query letters and publishing houses. During the month of June I plan to gain a great deal of experience figuring out how to submit my book for publication. (Going to seriously try to get the cart and the horse in the right order.)

The best part of this plan? This book travels well to the beach and 2pm to 5pm just happens to be prime beach time. I just love when a plan comes together, don’t you?

And so, as another day goes by, book in beach bag, chair in hand, I saunter off to the beach to spend the afternoon with the publishers, …’tis the life of a writer…and…I have written.
*Another Day Goes By is my daily blog that can be found at:
Another Day Goes By

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Apr

3

I have reached a part of my book where I felt it necessary to kill a character. Having never “offed” someone, I really struggled with it, but it was my fellow writer’s group member, Linda, who convinced me to do it. It was painful, I actually cried when I did it. I LOVE this character, but she had to go to move the story along. I found some tips to consider before killing off a character..a Blog post on Always a Writer Blog called Six Tips on the Art of Killing Characters.

The first-, you can’t kill a character just because. Check!-My character has to die to provide the impetus for the main character to do the right thing.

Next-The reader has to agree that the death was for the best.-Well that remains to be seen, but I think that the reader will agree.

Third-Have a logical death. Without giving away too much, this is definitely a logical death. My character, a gnome, lives underground. In the midst of a battle, the villan sends snakes into the gnome holes. Unfortunately, many gnomes meet an ugly fate, but I concentrate on the death of one particular gnome.

Fourth-Don’t resurrect too many characters. Now, as you can guess I am working on a “Fantasy” novel. I understand that resurrection is a handy tool for those characters a writer doesn’t really want to kill, just make it look that way. Since this is the first character I’ve killed, with no plans to resurrect, this doesn’t apply just yet, but I will definitely keep it in mind.

Fifth-Don’t be afraid to do it. I was. I sat for hours writing other scenarios and none of them had the effect I wanted or needed for the story. I really, really didn’t want to do it. I think (hope) that the reader will hate me for doing it, even as they see the need for it. I’ll hold off on whether I should thank Linda or blame her.

Last-Listen to your characters. My gnome was  brave, polite and a true friend. Her death, I believe, reflects her dedication to a cause  and strength of conviction. I hope the reader feels the same way.

But, I knew that I couldn’t end with just the death. There had to be a reaction to it, from the main characters and also from the surviving gnomes. And here inlies one of the difficulties with creating your own world. You have to create culture as well. How DO the gnomes respond. How DO they deal with death. What ritual/s are there, etc. It’s both a challenge and fun. I do hope, though, that I don’t have to kill off many more characters I come to love, but if I do, I’ll grab a kleenex before I start.

Jun

13

I finished my MG novel, Izzy B’s Notebook, and sent it off to the editor who critiqued the first ten pages at the NESCBWI Conference last month, as she requested. Now what? Would I ever have another book idea?

In the last month or so I had struggled and came up with a couple of ideas I felt luke-warm about. Had to rule them out. We must be passionate about what we write or we will fail to engage the reader. What to do next?

“Trust and surrender” are words I endeavor to live by. I asked the Universe/God/Higher Power (pick your favorite) to send me inspiration for a new book, took a deep breath, and carried on with day-to-day life as usual.

Only a few days later I was in the middle of writing my three “morning pages” (as suggested by Julia Cameron in The Artist’s Way) when an exciting book idea came to me. In my writing I was speculating if I could be an angel who decided to incarnate and that is why I find it so difficult to cope with the bad parts of experiencing earth life…

BINGO! Book idea: Ten-year-old Aubrielle wonders why she feels like such a misfit who doesn’t belong on a planet with so much cruelty. When she discovers she is an angel who decided to experience human life, she is shocked and wonders how she will survive.

I feel excited about beginning this new story. This morning in my meditation, the first chapter started appearing in my head—now if I had only written it down…

Angel Blessings, Susan Lee

Apr

30

Flaming Snot Rockets! By day Jim Hill is a graphic designer working with businesses to improve their branding, online presence and social media profile. By night he’s a children’s writer/illustrator out to make kids laugh until milk shoots out of their little noses.
He is a member of the Society of Children’s Book Writers & Illustrators, and serves on the boards of both the Cape Cod Technology Council and the Cape Cod Writers Center. You can find him online at heyjimhill.com

Spring is here, and that means it’s time for another #NaPiBoWriWee! What? You don’t know about this awesome, exciting, Twitter-based writing challenge for picture book writers like you? Read on, MacDuff.

#NaPiBoWriWee is the brain-child of Paula Yoo. It’s a response to NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) for children’s book writers and takes place May 1 – 7. The Twitter hashtag stands for “National Picture Book Writing Week” and the challenge thrown is to write a complete picture book manuscript for seven days in a row. Sounds simple? Ha! Give it a shot, tough guy.

Keep in mind that these are intended to be first drafts, and that means it’s OK to be messy, shitty even, to borrow the parlance of Anne Lamont. I know my stories this week will be brain-dumps of the first degree. Too wordy, shifting tense, changes in voice, etc. I may even change the characters names half-way through. And that’s OK. Viva la First Draft!

I do have a leg up on anyone starting fresh due to my other favorite Twitter-based writing challenge for picture book writers, #NaPiBoIdMo. That lovely hashtag was brought to life by Tara Lazar’s own response to NaNoWriMo and it stands for “National Picture Book Idea Month”. It takes place in November and is the perfect fraternal twin to #NaPiBoWriWee. Here’s why.

Every day during #NaPiBoIdMo the goal is to come up with a fresh picture book idea. No writing beyond the barebones idea is required, although you may end writing a bit (you can’t stop the brainstorms sometimes, just let’em roll).

The daily practice during these challenges can be tough, but it can also get you in a good working habit. I know I have to fight to carve out daily writing time. Accepting the challenge and following friends online helps me stay on target.

I can’t wait to open up my Google doc from November’s #NaPiBoIdMo and troll through for the ideas that have been waiting patiently for life. I’ve already written up a couple, but I have over two dozen other ideas to pick from, and reviewing those old ideas is very likely to spark something new. I am a writer, after all. *ahem*

I hope you’ll join me in #NaPiBoWriWee. Make sure to check out Paula’s site as well. She’ll be hosting famous guest bloggers and holding contests all week. I may even blog about it myself at heyjimhill.com. See you in the hashtags!

Mar

27

 

meds for a lost voice?

We all have voices, which we tend to use often and with force. Losing one’s voice usually means a trip to the doctor to find it. But the trip to find your literary voice isn’t as easy as a prescription and bed rest.

In our group we have a lady who has taken this journey and has founded her voice. More specifically, she found the voice of the wonderfully creative and sensitive pre-teen character called Izzy B. In that moment where the words stopped being Susan writing and Izzy B talking, Izzy B went from two dimensional to 3D sensational.

I’m not there yet. In fact I only realized I’d lost my voice on Wed. Maybe it was never even there to start with? As a writer I had so concentrated on plot and setting and story arc and humor and and and; I didn’t realize that this was still me writing, not Ben talking.

How do you do that?

It helps to have a real live person to imitate. But if like me you don’t have a handy 8 year old boy to use as a muse; you can use some of the tricks Krysti Sibley lists on this website:

http://writing2.richmond.edu/writing/wweb/voice.html

•Study writers who have a strong voice. “Never hesitate to imitate another writer. Imitation is an important part of the creative process for anyone learning an art or craft.” (Zinsser 238) Find the best writers in a field that interests you and read their work aloud. Get their voice and taste into your ear. “You too will shed your imitative skins and become who you are supposed to become.”

•Do frequent and regular freewriting exercises. Peter Elbow suggests, “Try to make up for all the writing you haven’t done. Use writing for as many different tasks as you can. Keep a notebook or journal to explore thoughts for yourself.” (Elbow 306)

•Write a lot without an audience. Try different tones and voices to discover what your inner self sounds like. “Fool around, jump from one mood or voice to another, mimic, play-act, dramatize, and exaggerate. Let your writing be outrageous. Practice relinquishing control.” (Elbow 306)

•Direct all your efforts into experiencing or re-experiencing what you are writing about. Be there. See it. Participate in what you are writing about and let the words come out.

•Write about what is important to you. If it is important, you’ll probably find the psychic energy you need to really connect with it or open yourself to it.

•Trust yourself and don’t think too hard about what you want to do to the reader.

•Don’t ask for too big an experience from your reader too soon.

•Learn to coach yourself, to give yourself pep talks as you write — especially if you sense yourself losing contact with what you are trying to write about.

•Whenever you get feedback, always ask readers to point out the bits that actually made them see, hear, or experience something. Strive for this in a few paragraphs in your next writing without a grade and then gradually build yourself up.

•Omit clichés. Taste chooses words that have surprise, strength and precision. Also, writing that will endure tends to consist of words that are short and strong; words that sedate are three, four, and five syllables.

•Say the sentence out loud before you write it. As Writing Tutor Todd Ferrante says, “By actually saying it aloud, they not only focus on their argument, but also create an original voice all their own.” Writing Fellow Anne Bolton agrees. “Read your paper aloud,” she says, “see if you would be bored to death or be passionate about reading the essay.”

 

So I’m off to stock-up on writer’s “cough drops and Halls”.

Good luck with finding yours.

Image from  “A DRAGON IN MY THROAT” by Jeanne Stewart

 

Mar

14

Q & A With Joseph Kelly

Last week I started a series of blogs on what I think of as the Boy Book Void: that big hole where the range of imaginative, popular, inspiring books for middle grade boys should be.

I had started this quest as part of my research for my own middle grade chapter book for boys, GLOW BALL WARNING. And if you had read last week’s blog, (nudge nudge)you know I stumbled across two beacons of light in the literary desert. One of them was illustrated by Joseph Kelly.

I reminded myself that we African chics generally don’t come without buckets of courage, and jotted an e-mail to Mr Kelly, illustrator extraordinaire. I promised not to flood him with too many questions, with the hope that he would answer at least one.

And he did.

Brilliantly…

Q: Can you explain the dynamics between you, the author ( Jessica Scott Kerrin), and Debbie Rogosin, the series editor for Martin Bridge?

A: Happily, I had complete creative freedom while making the art for the Martin Bridge books, but I don’t think that would have meant as much as it did if the entire team hadn’t been as talented and dedicated as it was.

The creative core of the Martin Bridge series consisted of author Jessica, editor Debbie, designer Julia and me.  Once Debbie and Jessica had the text finalized – months of work in itself – Julia would roughly lay out the pages for the story with gaps left for possible illustrations, and then she’d email me a PDF file to look over.  I’d print the pages and tape together a full-sized rough and read it several times while making notes in the margins.  After a couple of days I’d send Debbie and Julia a list of suggestions for where I’d like the illustrations to go.  This had to be done quickly because the clock to the artwork deadline was now definitely ticking.  Mostly I would ask if the space for a picture could be moved or stretched across two pages.  Sometimes I’d want a more organic space that might cut through the text diagonally.  Once in a while I’d ask if a line or two of text could be shifted to the next page to accommodate a clearer illustration.  Debbie and Julia would review my requests, then Julia would go to work and a couple days later I’d get another PDF with the requested changes included.

Then it was pencil rough time.  The Martin Bridge books needed upwards of eighty illustrations with a schedule of only about a hundred and twenty days to get everything roughed-in, approved and then completed and delivered as digital TIFF files, so the pencil roughs had to be essentially finished line art.  Problem was, I’d have to also do all the research and design, including new character designs, on the fly. The main characters of Martin, Alex, Stuart, Laila and Martin’s parents had all been designed and approved before the first book was illustrated but there was always someone or something new that had to be drawn.  On major items like Martin’s teachers or the family house I’d submit a design to Debbie before proceeding.  As the drawing progressed I’d email Debbie batches of illustrations, mostly so she could keep track of where I was  When the pencil roughs were finished Julia would drop the art into the text and send it to Debbie for review.

This was always a tense time for me.  What if there were a lot of changes?  What if some drawings had to be completely redone? There was really no reason to worry – there are always some changes – but I guess after the big push to get the pencils done it was hard to turn the creative process off, or at least down, because – tick-tock-tick-tock – that deadline clock was running.

After a few days Debbie would send me her notes, several single-spaced pages.  Most of the notes were comments like ‘nice’ or ‘the treehouse looks good’ but there were always some changes, too.  I never argued because Debbie always made her point logically. She was right.  Once in a great while she and Julia might hash it out and decide that an illustration of another moment in the scene would be better, and that would mean a complete re-draw, but mostly the comments were things like ‘Martin’s left eye looks odd’ or ‘is that the same lunchbox he had in book 3′.  Julia had already sent me the PDF with the pencils included so I’d print out and make a new copy for myself and then cut up and tape in Debbie’s notes at the appropriate places so I wouldn’t forget to make the changes.

Now it was time to finish the finals with all the changes incorporated.  Because the deadline was looming this meant for the Martin Bridge books that I’d have to often complete up to three or four pieces of art a day.  The grayscale art was mostly shaded digitally in Photoshop or Painter, not because it was easier than using paint or ink but because I had to have a way of quickly getting consistent gray values from one piece of art to the next.  Also, all sorts of brushes can be made and saved in Photoshop and Painter for effects that aren’t timely using ink or paint.  And, working digitally, if an artist’s monitor is properly calibrated there will never be any nasty surprises when the proofs come back from the printer.

Then when all the final art for the story was finished and sent to the publisher’s server the whole process would start again for the next story — and then came The Cover.  Throughout the process of illustrating the stories Debbie and I would exchange ideas for the book’s front and back covers.  I’d often send several color roughs that would get a polite thumbs down, but when we found an idea we both liked Debbie would take the rough and vanish for a time into the Land of Meetings.  Understandably covers are a big deal in publishing.  Everyone wants to have a say concerning the cover, especially Marketing, so sometimes I’d have to try again, but mostly it was just a case of adjusting a background color or fiddling with Martin’s costume.  Then front and back covers were painted, the book was reviewed by the publisher with a scanning electron microscope (not really but close), and I would collapse in a heap until the truly wonderful, magical, without precedent moment when a magnificent FedEx box stuffed with Martin Bridge books arrived on my doorstep.

 

Q: What comes first, an image in your mind or an idea for a scenario?

A: For me, it’s the scenario. My mind is always flipping through a mental rolodex of possible pictures, 99% of which I’ll never sketch, let alone paint. But if I have even a simple story to plug an image into then a random picture wafting around my brain just might get lucky and become a painting.  It could be anything, even something like ‘some cows walked up a hill’, and I’ll be off and drawing.

The Pepperpot Piper webcomic is something I’ve been preparing for months. I won’t even start to design the site until this Summer. All of the research and sketching of Jazz Age cars and clothes as well as a few main character maquettes in clay are happening now, but by far the most important part is the script, a story arc in three parts, 2/3s of which is solid, done, finito and ready to draw. I’ve seen other artists dive into making their online comics without a finished script or with just a vague idea of where it’s going to go, but I can’t imagine working that way! There’s no possibility of complexity in stream-of-consciousness writing and the very real possibility that the project will wander into the weeds or crash and burn before it finds its legs. Some comics have peaked my interest only to stop dead, abandoned, not updated for months or years, victims of the trap of having a weekly deadline but nothing to say. One ongoing comic I visit has been in the midst of a fight between characters for six weeks – that’s a lot of brawling and not much story. This is very sad, all that work for so little return! And it could have been avoided by doing some planning before they started to draw.

For instance, Pepperpot Piper has adamantine rules for the lead character. Among them, Pepperpot is the Jazz Age’s spunkiest flapper, who always accepts the basic humanity of anyone she meets, even the strip’s sundry goons, mesmerists, mad scientists and robots. She is a knee-jerk humanist. She will never be drawn holding a gun or any weapon and will never resort to mayhem to get out of a pickle. There are more rules, but you get the point.  A little preplanning and maybe even a germ of a story are, I believe, pretty important before the pencil hits the paper.

Q: How do you deal with the differences between grayscale and color illustrations, and what is your preference?

A: I very much prefer to work in color. You can squeeze a lot of passion out of line art and wash, but it tries to fight you all the way since working in black and white is limiting by its very nature. It’s easy to make a character pop or direct a reader’s eye or ramp up the excitement when working in color, but black and white pretty much gives you one option – lose, or at least gray-out, that background you toiled over all day!

You rightly noted that Pepperpot Piper is in black and white. But actually what I’ve completed is in full color, though I’ll be desaturating the art and presenting it in grayscale because  – 1 – it feels more appropriate to the Jazz Age and – 2 – when or if it comes time to start selling printed strips I’m pretty certain I won’t be able to spring for printing a four color comic, no matter how much I want to. I’ll still have the color version in case a miracle happens.

To see Joseph Kelly’s work in all its wonder:

http://illustratedbyjosephkelly.com/home5.html

Make sure you spend a moment either online or with an actual copy of A Paddling of Ducks  (written by Marjorie Blain Parker). Like myself, you’ll be dazzled by the vividness of his work.

Jonesing for more Joseph?

http://www.kidscanpress.com/US/CreatorDetails.aspx?cid=613

http://www.scbwi.org/MemberProfile.aspx?u=2846741730914718

Sep

25

The thumb test, as its been called, is designed to see if your story is flat in any areas.  Its simple, Take any book.  Really.  I can wait.  Waiting…….  Okay, now that you have it, open to any page.  Yup, just flip that book and land on any page.  Now, READ. 

Ask yourself, “What is the tension?”

“Who are the characters?”

“Where does it seem like I am?”

The story should tell you on every page.  It should have a feeling on every page.  Your character should be present on every page.

Exhibit A; Peter Pan, a random page in Chapter 16

“Some of them wanted it to be an honest ship and others were in favour of keeping it a pirate; but the captain treated them as dogs, and they dared not express their wishes to him even in a round robin [one person after another, as they had to Cpt. Hook]. Instant obedience was the only safe thing. Slightly got a dozen for looking perplexed when told to take soundings. The general feeling was that Peter was honest just now to lull Wendy’s suspicions, but that there might be a change when the new suit was ready, which, against her will, she was making for him out of some of Hook’s wickedest garments. It was afterwards whispered among them that on the first night he wore this suit he sat long in the cabin with Hook’s cigar-holder in his mouth and one hand clenched, all but for the forefinger, which he bent and held threateningly aloft like a hook.

Instead of watching the ship, however, we must now return to that desolate home from which three of our characters had taken heartless flight so long ago. It seems a shame to have neglected No. 14 all this time; and yet we may be sure that Mrs. Darling does not blame us. If we had returned sooner to look with sorrowful sympathy at her, she would probably have cried, “Don’t be silly; what do I matter? Do go back and keep an eye on the children.” So long as mothers are like this their children will take advantage of them; and they may lay to [bet on] that.

Even now we venture into that familiar nursery only because its lawful occupants are on their way home; we are merely hurrying on in advance of them to see that their beds are properly aired and that Mr. and Mrs. Darling do not go out for the evening. We are no more than servants. Why on earth should their beds be properly aired, seeing that they left them in such a thankless hurry? Would it not serve them jolly well right if they came back and found that their parents were spending the week-end in the country? It would be the moral lesson they have been in need of ever since we met them; but if we contrived things in this way Mrs. Darling would never forgive us.”

Ask yourself, “What is the tension?”

“Who are the characters?”

“Where does it seem like I am?”

Sep

10

 Donald Maass in his book Writing the Breakout Novel states on page 195: “My own feeling is that voice is a natural attribute. You no more control it than you can control the color of your eyes—nor would you want to. Plenty of breakout authors have a distinctive voice…Your voice is your self in the story.”

 When I read this I wondered, is this true? In writing Izzy B’s notebook, I must admit, the “voice” seems to come very naturally and organically. I just hear how she talks and write down what she says. Is Izzy B’s voice my “self in the story”? Could be, according to Donald Maass.

 Next I wondered, so, do we have only one voice then? I suspect not. Do we not have many aspects of this “self” we think of as “us”? If so, then depending on the character we are writing about we might tap into that aspect of ourselves and write from that voice.

 These ideas fascinate me. Writing stories seems very magical to me. I mean, where do thoughts come from, anyway? Don’t they just seem to appear in your head from nowhere?

 Angel Blessing, Susan

Aug

20

I have always heard that a writer should “write what you know”. Until today…

 I started a new book, Writing the Breakout Novel by Donald Maass, with a foreword written by Anne Perry. Ms. Perry, in answer to the question, “Is it true you should write what you know about?” replies: “No, write what you care about. If you don’t know, you’ll find out. But if you don’t care, why should anyone else?”

 Good point, I thought. I have always felt that a writer needs to feel passionate about his/her story in order to grab the reader’s lasting attention.

 I find I do my best writing when I can lose myself in the story and the characters. They start to take on a life of their own and the story takes off seemingly by their direction. Sometimes I even get to a place where it is like writing down a drama I am seeing and hearing in my head. It just flows forth like magic. How heavenly.

 So, yes, I agree with Ms. Perry. It is essential that writers “care” about what they are writing. It is probably a good idea to write what they know as well.

 Angel Blessings, Susan

Aug

13

 

I am nearly finished reading The First Five Pages, A Writer’s Guide to Staying out of the Rejection Pile by Noah Lukeman (27 pages to go).

  While the book is not geared particularly to writers of children’s books, it is packed with valuable information, suggestions and end-of-chapter exercises.  Mr. Lukeman includes writing examples which work as well as those that don’t—very helpful.

 I find myself wondering how I could ever possibly master presentation, style, showing vs. telling, viewpoint and narration, characterization, dialogue, hooks, subtlety, tone, focus, setting, pacing and progression—just some of the chapter topics. And if I did, would it be enough? Or is there something else required? Innate talent perhaps?

Neverthelsess, if the writer’s bug has bit you, you just gotta write. So write for the joy of it! In my opinion, that is a worthwhile goal. And if the day comes when you “get published”—icing on the cake!

 Angel Blessings, Susan

Aug

7

So, a couple weeks ago I posted a writing contest.  You all have informed me by various means that you need more time than I give.  Next time I promise to give at least two weeks.  Karen is still declared the ultimate winner of round two.  I love the personality she created.  Below are two recently received entries.  I thought we could discuss them today. 

1. The smell of bacon cooking with roasted pineapples eased me out of a deep sleep. I grabbed a candlestick to light my way. Walking through the rough walkway I tripped on an old toy robot. Fortunately, the aroma of fresh coffee brewing grabbed my attention. It’s all good again.
by Marie Woods

Wow, sensory skills in use here.  I love the word roasted with pineapples, I don’t usually think of pineapples this way I can see the sugar caramelizing on them.  (Dinner tonight, maybe?) Marie tells the story of my pre-caffeinated mornings, so I can connect.  One thing to work on; I am not sure where I am.  Some suggestions; add to light my way (through the graveyard, demolished living room ect.  Another place could be attached to the robot.  Like changing “an” to” my”, now I am thinking that I’m in a familiar, yet unfamiliarplace  creating a feeling of nostalgia.  I like how you use humor to describe your characters rebound.       

Marie, Great work here.  I really hope you enter the next contest (posted in two weeks). 

2. One cloudy day the rough wind tore the shingles from the deserted Cape type house. Helena moved like a robot picking them up as she popped sweet pineapple slices into her mouth. Tonight she would need a candlestick to see.

By Christina Laurie

Christina tried the minimalist approach.  She used 39 words and snuck in the six required words effortlessly.  What I like; using a a noun robot as an adjective.  Great twist.  It makes the reader really see more of Helena.  It is very direct.  I like that. Is it possible to use the last 11 words to create more drama?  Not that you need to, but want to. 

Aug

6

I wrote my first book as a middle grade novel and thought my second would be one also. Now I am not so sure…

 Recently I read a “Ramona” book and previously was enchanted by “Clementine”—both chapter books. Perhaps Izzy B, age 10, the main character of my new book, should come to life in a chapter book rather than a middle grade novel… As I write I am thinking a chapter book (for ages 7 to 10) feels more appropriate than a middle grade novel (for ages 9 to 12)…

 And my new book continues to evolve, idea by idea.

 Angel Blessings, Susan

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